Sunday, 29 April 2012

Too late

 

dVerse poem

In prickled night of starry widow's lace
an empty face,

eyes candle bright, body of shadow coat
awaits for throat,

so tender white and free from loving kiss
and nightly bliss.

And she of lemon soap and gentle frown
in bridal gown

dance cherry blossom free with steps of spring
that hope does bring.

Outside, the darkness sings a lullaby
for eyes to die

in slumber lily pure until a bite
cast out sunlight.

and now the blood of men awakes her shroud -
if he's endowed.

Dear reader, mock you this tale of night's fear
with righteous sneer

and one dark night your tearful friends will tell,
He did not yell

16 comments:

  1. Ohhhh. Love. Especially:
    "And you of lemon soap and gentle frown
    in bridal gown"

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  2. ha nice to hear and see you read this john...esp. loved ...And you of lemon soap and gentle frown
    in bridal gown dance cherry blossom free...great contrast to the second part of the poem with the smell of blood..

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    1. Yes, it came from playing with images

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  3. Pitch perfect tale of woe. The video is a real treat with so much depth gained through tone and expression. My vampire poem: http://chromapoesy.com/2012/04/28/soul-to-tinder/

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    1. Yes, I increasingly wonder at poetry only for reading

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  4. smiles....very nice....i really like the lemon soap and gentle frown line it makes for a nice contrast for what is to come....the cherry blossom makes a nice image as well and transition to the ripped bodice....

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    1. Always surprises me to see what emerges

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  5. The rhymed couplets of uneven line length lend themselves well to mesmerizing the reader, as they run through your retel
    Ing of the mythos.

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  6. Liked the rhyme, hypnotic effect of the reading, and of course, cherry blossoms (now that's unusual in a vampire tale :P)

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    1. Got to slip in counter-genre surprises!

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  7. Nice to hear your poem...shivers...rich imagery..I am keeping my eyes opened ~

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    1. Yes, I tend to 'perform' my poems when I write so they have to be heard!

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  8. I love the last line. It finishes it off well :)

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